I Just Finished Chapter Two
Again.
I'm still worried about a possible information dump. Oh, who am I trying to kid? It's definitely an information dump. I'm just hoping that the dump is threaded with young Olivia's suffering, too, so that the dump will be broken up by character development.
Maybe a dump is okay if it doesn't appear too dumpy. I hope so, anyway.
Labels: Technique
1 Comments:
Ugh.
Having rewritten the first six chapters of my work in progress three times... I feel your pain...
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